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Review Detail of ThatOneGUy in Kaijin Fighter: So I Have to Make Monsters, So What?

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ThatOneGUy
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I read until chapter 300 almost, 295, only reason I even did so was the whole book was free thanks to the webnovel deal they have where certain books are unlocked completely for a limited time. The plot was inconsistent and chaotic and full of filler, half the time I couldn't make heads or tails of what was happening or why it was happening, the author has a severe randomness problem, this also ties into the plot, for the times I can actually comprehend with is going on overall and their is a point to the madness with an over arching story in general for each arch its fleshed out poorly, alot of the time the pacing sucks and I just find myself wanting to get it over with, the jokes are unfunny and only once in the entire 300 chapters where they finally faced off against the wolf clan or whatever and the action somehow finally psyched me up a Lil bit. Overall while the story isn't bad, it has a randomness and filler problem that often makes me question if it weren't free could I justify spending my coins on it, at least for me o wouldn't be able to justify to myself unlocking this rather than something else, the kaijus characters I didn't really find cool, the jokes unfunny, the whole acting like your stronger than you really are trope was over used and alot of the time I just wanted the MC and his allies to bash the enemies skull in already in boredom and frustration, and filler and chaotic writing plagued many chapters, do I need to know every single thought of every character involved in this one scene happing at one point of the story? He'll no! 2.2 stars is my rating, go spend coins on some other summoner MC book.

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Kaijin Fighter: So I Have to Make Monsters, So What?

Mizako

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Mizako
MizakoAuthorMizako

huh...first time I got a negative review that wasn't just "it has harem, go kill yourself"

ThatOneGUy
ThatOneGUyLv4ThatOneGUy

Okay here you go " Your story is the lowest of the lowest mid mediocre trash LNs on webnovel, it could have been more but because of your crippling crackfic addiction and tendency to ball bust us readers constantly edging us for way too long until the MC finally makes a proper move and how stupid the MC is you have ruined your book and it's potential, please blow your brains out with a shotgun"

Mizako:huh...first time I got a negative review that wasn't just "it has harem, go kill yourself"
Mizako
MizakoAuthorMizako

yeesh, didn't mean to touch a nerve.

ThatOneGUy:Okay here you go " Your story is the lowest of the lowest mid mediocre trash LNs on webnovel, it could have been more but because of your crippling crackfic addiction and tendency to ball bust us readers constantly edging us for way too long until the MC finally makes a proper move and how stupid the MC is you have ruined your book and it's potential, please blow your brains out with a shotgun"
ThatOneGUy
ThatOneGUyLv4ThatOneGUy

Hey author, it's been 4 months, have you done anything, rewritten old chapters, sped things up in New ones, generally something to solve these issues? Please tell me because unless you plan to buy the chapters for me or make it free I'm not reading this again to find out xd

Mizako:yeesh, didn't mean to touch a nerve.
Mizako
MizakoAuthorMizako

I have been editing mistakes when pointed out, yes

ThatOneGUy
ThatOneGUyLv4ThatOneGUy

So you aren't ball busting us readers anylonger?

Mizako:I have been editing mistakes when pointed out, yes
Ashton_Denton
Ashton_DentonLv13Ashton_Denton

Wow thatneguy