So...I wrote this and I'm biased, so there. On the flip side, I wrote this story because when I grew up watching power rangers and stuff, I found the monsters and mechs way more interesting than the rangers themselves. As I got older, I noticed that there were few to no stories about the monsters being the stars, except for like this one mobile game, so I took it upon myself to write myself. A singular protagonist is boring to me, so expect an ensemble of weirdos.
Mizako
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LIKEI haven't read your story yet, since I like to binge read (I usually wait for at least 2-300 chapters before trying a new novel) but I really hope MC is more like the Shadow Monarch in solo leveling; instead of in Pokemon where the trainers just hide while pets do all the battling... I understand from summary that the MC is unable to cultivate but I hope he's at least able to obtain some powers from his summons/pets so that he's at least able to hold his own against an opponent or two if he's ever ambushed.👍
Dakota_Whitley:should try writing a predator novel off alien vs predator haven't seen one yet so it would be something new
Hey there, I can see the Harem tag, but will it truly really be a 'Harem'? Hopefully so, Asking for a friend :D
Mizako:not yet
_BLACK:-author there's only one protagoniste ?? -author is Mc dumb or is he cold and smart give us some information about his personality -author there will be lemons or not 😎
Mizako:ok I just googled it, this book is rated R, although...maybe as a side thing ala SAO
Mizako:ok I just googled it, this book is rated R, although...maybe as a side thing ala SAO
Amazing Story Can you make a healer/stealth type kaijin like Elf + Tree of life + Druid = Nature type kaijin Fox + Illusion +Shadow= lunar type kaijin Behemoth + size/ body manipulation+ Slime= Mount type Kaijin Weapon master + Spectre + Arsenal= weapon type Kaijin Dragon + Werewolf + Vampire + Bone manipulation= Apex type kaijin Also in the future can you have him or his kaijin to rob some criminals or an auction because they will have the best materials for new kaijin
Devil_Prince_Asura:Amazing Story Can you make a healer/stealth type kaijin like Elf + Tree of life + Druid = Nature type kaijin Fox + Illusion +Shadow= lunar type kaijin Behemoth + size/ body manipulation+ Slime= Mount type Kaijin Weapon master + Spectre + Arsenal= weapon type Kaijin Dragon + Werewolf + Vampire + Bone manipulation= Apex type kaijin Also in the future can you have him or his kaijin to rob some criminals or an auction because they will have the best materials for new kaijin
I have a suggestion for a character and chapter This suggestion is for the Zhen Liu wedding and not his two cousins. Once Zhen Liu and family returned home his in-laws are still arguing about who is going to be the first wife with the patriarch. But what they didn’t know is Zhen Liu’s fiancés and girlfriends had a girls night with Zhen Liu’s mother. Alicia and bellona wanted to talk about adding Jin Fang and Rebecca as Zhen Liu’s fiancés and all four have it on the same day. They discuss how they wanted the first half of the wedding to be a fight against all four girls since all the girls have been training in secret. The reason is because they know after the wedding Zhen Liu is going to travel and the girls didn’t want to be left behind like their a burden. The girls wanted to show their strength to everyone and especially for Zhen Liu. This fight will also show which girl will be the first wife and also who will say their wedding vowels first and last. And Alicia will being the best healing pill so the will look beautiful for the wedding and Zhen Liu’s mother help them with everything and talk the in-laws and hide this form Zhen Liu. Second can you have Zhen Liu’s suggest to him to be some type of merchant selling his inventions but acting like it’s someone else’s since the library of nowhere has a lot knowledge plus the knowledge of earth since we’ve seen you use the knowledge, but he’s not making any profit. Like the boat and the hot tube the kaijin made. You can have them build some type of easy to make energy core that can power most of items they make like weapons, armor, and clothings. Or something he just always wanted in some comic or movie like a hoverboard. Because I know you can make both of the scenarios into something hilarious and serious. This suggestion is for a Character she will be a loli feline Bloodliner(lioness jaguar panther types) she is an energetic, short tempered foodie with a body constitution called True Apex and around Zhen Liu age. This body constitution gives her abnormal strength also let her absorb the abilities and body features of the Aether beast or something people she (hunt/kills)but more abilities for killing. This constitution also has another ability but it relies on having a mate and doing a ritual. The person must kiss the person that she deems worthy of being her mate. By doing this she will inject some type anesthetic that will weak her mates body defenses so she can bite him and make a bond between them. This will also allow them to know where each others are, share sense, and share some abilities. It’s basically like having a wedding in her tribe. She was find by Zhen Liu in an underground fighter Arena as a (Slave or Gladiator) but she acted more as a beast than human. But he noticed that this one has more than one desire it was like coming from two people. You can think of this situation as when Bruce Banner gets angry and turn into the hulk but she is having trouble turning off her beast side because of the constant battles she is in try to survive and find her (family/ or a family to call her own). Like I said before I know you can make this an interesting and hilarious scenario if you use it or part of it.
Mizako:similar ideas are in the work.
Devil_Prince_Asura:I have a suggestion for a character and chapter This suggestion is for the Zhen Liu wedding and not his two cousins. Once Zhen Liu and family returned home his in-laws are still arguing about who is going to be the first wife with the patriarch. But what they didn’t know is Zhen Liu’s fiancés and girlfriends had a girls night with Zhen Liu’s mother. Alicia and bellona wanted to talk about adding Jin Fang and Rebecca as Zhen Liu’s fiancés and all four have it on the same day. They discuss how they wanted the first half of the wedding to be a fight against all four girls since all the girls have been training in secret. The reason is because they know after the wedding Zhen Liu is going to travel and the girls didn’t want to be left behind like their a burden. The girls wanted to show their strength to everyone and especially for Zhen Liu. This fight will also show which girl will be the first wife and also who will say their wedding vowels first and last. And Alicia will being the best healing pill so the will look beautiful for the wedding and Zhen Liu’s mother help them with everything and talk the in-laws and hide this form Zhen Liu. Second can you have Zhen Liu’s suggest to him to be some type of merchant selling his inventions but acting like it’s someone else’s since the library of nowhere has a lot knowledge plus the knowledge of earth since we’ve seen you use the knowledge, but he’s not making any profit. Like the boat and the hot tube the kaijin made. You can have them build some type of easy to make energy core that can power most of items they make like weapons, armor, and clothings. Or something he just always wanted in some comic or movie like a hoverboard. Because I know you can make both of the scenarios into something hilarious and serious. This suggestion is for a Character she will be a loli feline Bloodliner(lioness jaguar panther types) she is an energetic, short tempered foodie with a body constitution called True Apex and around Zhen Liu age. This body constitution gives her abnormal strength also let her absorb the abilities and body features of the Aether beast or something people she (hunt/kills)but more abilities for killing. This constitution also has another ability but it relies on having a mate and doing a ritual. The person must kiss the person that she deems worthy of being her mate. By doing this she will inject some type anesthetic that will weak her mates body defenses so she can bite him and make a bond between them. This will also allow them to know where each others are, share sense, and share some abilities. It’s basically like having a wedding in her tribe. She was find by Zhen Liu in an underground fighter Arena as a (Slave or Gladiator) but she acted more as a beast than human. But he noticed that this one has more than one desire it was like coming from two people. You can think of this situation as when Bruce Banner gets angry and turn into the hulk but she is having trouble turning off her beast side because of the constant battles she is in try to survive and find her (family/ or a family to call her own). Like I said before I know you can make this an interesting and hilarious scenario if you use it or part of it.
Mizako:I'm going to have to plead the fifth on some of these.