This novel has potential. Hopefully it won't disappoint. Good luck author. fsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfs
MellowGuy
Liked it!
The best advice I can give to the author is to not add unnecessary romance since good romance is hard to write for author's that don't have as much experience. I've seen many good novels get ruined by a completely useless romance.