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First of all, I really like the cover! 🤗 I love the atmosphere of the novel. The author was not trying to impress but the simplicity of it flawlessly made the foundation of the novel, letting the readers know about the personality of the characters and the world in the process. It appears she didn't even need to try but the results were still more than presentable. The semi-happy-go-lucky MC named Lihua was funny, keeping the readers engaged and avoiding boring stuff. I loved the awesome snippets of comedy without disrupting the trajectory of the plot. The vibes were just chilling and satisfying, you wouldn't realize that you're in the most recent published chapter. Now don't get me wrong, it wasn't boring at all! You'll know once you have read it. Although I am into mafia genres, especially since I'm watching the kdrama titled "Vincenzo" recently, I know for sure that you will fall in love with the ingenuity of this novel and the potential of how deep the worldbuilding was. The writing was seamless and the reading immersion was so smooth. The pacing or transition of the novel was wonderful as well with excellent cuts, concentrating on the interesting parts only and avoiding unnecessary or unimportant things in the process. This is what I am always checking in novels like this, the transition and cuts. The author executed it well. Kudos! Overall, it's a great read. It's worth a try reading this! Give it a chance! I hope I provided a good review without spoiling, author-nim. 🤣 Thanks for the effort making this Author. You did a splendid job. 🤗😊

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The Mafia King's First Love

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Omggggg thank you for such a detailed review!! 😍😍😍 I am so happy! Please keep supporting! 💖💖💖