Review Detail of Tito_Lasanta in Genius Mage in a Cultivation World

Item: Genius Mage in a Cultivation World
Rating: 3

Review detail

Tito_LasantaLv42yrTito_Lasanta

the story looks good but the grammar upsets me :c, also some sudden turns in the naration, like going from he to i in the middle of the naration lowers the seriousness of the work. Some concepts are partialy badly exlplained, but lets say thats part of the story. Author should reread his work a bit more

Genius Mage in a Cultivation World

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Here_is_a_PotatoLv5Here_is_a_Potato

Kinda funny how you're complaining about grammar while your review makes the grammar police wanna end themselves.

2yr

Hungry_HugoLv13Hungry_Hugo

I would say that bad grammar is more confusing to people who aren't as proficient in the language.

Here_is_a_Potato:Kinda funny how you're complaining about grammar while your review makes the grammar police wanna end themselves.

2yr