Review Detail of Damek in Fate Love Game

Item: Fate Love Game
Rating: 1.6

Review detail

DamekLv12yrDamek

To be honest I really wanted to enjoy this story, but it's really bad. Every dialogue between characters feels so fake, unreal, not human. Characters themselves are cliche, boring and dumb. Naoki - A girl to blush everytime MC talks. MC - I dunno, "mysterious guy" with some trauma and skills, but pretty cliche and really dumb. Nothing new. For a story rated 4.98/5, it's seriously BAD, I've never read anything worse than this story, I don't know how the rating is this high, MAYBE someone deleted few reviews or something, not that I'm trying to suggest anything here.

Fate Love Game

Xeoz

Liked by 11 people

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XeozAuthorXeoz

Thanks for the review. Can't blame you if you don't like the story. For the dialogues, it's my first time writing it.

2yr

XeozAuthorXeoz

In the first few chapters, I'm still learning the ropes of how to create a character and some stuff(Of course on how dialogues and conversation works too.). At first, I was planning to rewrite but got lazy in the end, so sorry about that.

2yr

Villain116Lv3Villain116

Thank God someone is there like me lol

Xeoz:In the first few chapters, I'm still learning the ropes of how to create a character and some stuff(Of course on how dialogues and conversation works too.). At first, I was planning to rewrite but got lazy in the end, so sorry about that.

2yr