Review Detail of Kindread4440 in Fate Love Game

This is what I would consider a diamond in the rough. It has the potential, if executed correctly, to be an extremely GOOOOOOOOOD story. The writing quality, while a little scuffed in the earlier chapters, definitely improves later on, and as confirmed by the author, this is their first novel, so it's only natural. Second, stability of updates. The author tries to update once a day, but there is usually 3-5 chapters a week (at the time of this review :P), so not bad at all, but you know, a chapter a day keeps the depression away ;). When it comes to story development, I would rate it a 4, since it is moving along somewhat slowly, but the romance is developing so I don't mind. In addition, the foreshadowing of certain things are very good (wink wink). In terms of character design, there are definitely a few "2D" characters, but the main cast mainly feel like actual humans capable of making both rational and irrational decisions in the heat of the moment. When it comes to world background, we don't know much about it, but I'll give it a five anyway :D! Anyway, keep it up author!