This is a really good and interesting fanfic. All the chapters were very well written and I really didn't see any problems with the fanfic. If there was a point to improve, it is that the mc hasn't started training kenjutsu even though he knows that his cheat (he hasn't woken up yet) is a sword. But it is worth mentioning that the MC didn't have much time to train yet and focused on strengthening the bases, so it makes sense not to have used a sword yet. To be honest, it is a pity such a good fanfic to reach so few readers and may have been severely hampered by the new fan ranking system that separates male mc from famele mc. Perhaps it is good if the author posts this fanfic in the ranking of male mc also to see if it reaches more readers. For example, I don't care if the MC is male or female and I still forget to look at both rankings when looking for new fanfics.
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