Review Detail of LoL_DxD in Holistic Fantasy

(my rates is about the whole novel as i read this one on MTL and its completely finished but im not gonna give details on the plot just stars ) i remember this this is one of the best anime fan-fic i read that i even read in on MTL i persevered and i got to read the whole the novel and the translation site of this is slow but if u can make it better translation, good grammar and do frequent update I'll read it but having permission is much better as people who got hook maybe stop reading by getting u ban or drop the novel translation