Interesting concept, but the pacing is off and the MC’s actions at times are ridiculous. The translation quality is bad in the beginning and only gets worse. In ch. 109, basically everyone is referred to as he/him, the MC is referred to as Monn/Barton/Grace, his daughter is now Elendil. Its difficult to get into the story when you have to constantly reread paragraphs that didnt make sense.
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