REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is a published work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! Realistic first-person narration, Exciting to read and wanted to to crave for more and fluidity on its finest! ADVICE None, the author was a better writer than me. Kudos!
Arcana_Legends
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LIKEMel_Aniv:From review swap dear sir!.......... Please also check out my humble novel, please if you have the time 🙏 😉 ❤️
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Arcana_Legends:Thank you so much Im reading it right now and enjoying it