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TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrLv123yrTruckkunJr

Currently a very good Fanfic that I would recommend to any person that believes themselves to be a man/woman of Culture. There is a very good develop going on with the relationships of the MC's. They don't immediately become head over heels for him because he's handsome. All that I hope for is possible Lemons in the Future even if it just describes what they are doing. My degenerate side is showing and who do I card! Please don't drop the Fanfic, it has soo much talent to be great!

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No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)

Bukaro

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Bukaro
BukaroAuthorBukaro

The R18 and the action scenes are difficult for me, I enjoy doing character development but the above is difficult for me and I don't know if it will be of the right quality

TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrLv12TruckkunJr

Their actually fairly simple. When I made my first one I believed it to be bad but to only get good reviews. You will get better the more you try. Plus Idm if the scenes isn't that good, because you can improve on them.

Bukaro:The R18 and the action scenes are difficult for me, I enjoy doing character development but the above is difficult for me and I don't know if it will be of the right quality
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Bukaro
BukaroAuthorBukaro

I don't know, personally, I don't feel very comfortable writing H scenes unless it's a parody ... I'll see if at some point I do it but I don't promise anything

TruckkunJr:Their actually fairly simple. When I made my first one I believed it to be bad but to only get good reviews. You will get better the more you try. Plus Idm if the scenes isn't that good, because you can improve on them.
TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrLv12TruckkunJr

Yh it gets kind of weird while making them but makes it more 'enjoyable' for the readers. You decide if you want to write them.

Bukaro:I don't know, personally, I don't feel very comfortable writing H scenes unless it's a parody ... I'll see if at some point I do it but I don't promise anything
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Bukaro
BukaroAuthorBukaro

Thanks for the tip <3

TruckkunJr:Yh it gets kind of weird while making them but makes it more 'enjoyable' for the readers. You decide if you want to write them.
TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrLv12TruckkunJr

I love giving advices to fellow writers. Hope you keep the fanfic going, I don't wanna see another good FF drop.

Bukaro:Thanks for the tip <3
Pervert_In_Net
Pervert_In_NetLv6Pervert_In_Net

I would also like to see some limons in the story, it's the icing on the cake after all! if you're not really going to write, then a tip, don't mention anything to understand that they did it or create a perverted character that keeps teasing and touching the girls it will only leave readers frustrated.

Bukaro:The R18 and the action scenes are difficult for me, I enjoy doing character development but the above is difficult for me and I don't know if it will be of the right quality
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Bukaro
BukaroAuthorBukaro

Emmmm, I sorry

Pervert_In_Net:I would also like to see some limons in the story, it's the icing on the cake after all! if you're not really going to write, then a tip, don't mention anything to understand that they did it or create a perverted character that keeps teasing and touching the girls it will only leave readers frustrated.