This is my most accurate evaluation. Writting is good but adding chinese bllsht sentences makes it so much worse. Updates are ok so not complain on that part Story and the world background is one of the main problems. I can understand that the MC can break the 4rth wall any time he wants but author adds that soo many times it makes the quality drop super hard. At first it was nice but then you notice he doesn't stop adding that .. this feels like watching a movie and having an old man stopping the video every 20 seconds to coment. it's ok for 1-2 times but then.... Extra coment: adding any cultivation coments even to reperent world definitions of power, abilities , way of speaking is cancer to my ears and many other people's ears. I'll be dropping here.
Azerial
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LIKEAuthor i have some questions before reading and those are 1)will mc love his harem 2)will mc take his harem with him to other worlds 3) will there be smut or r18 chapters
Azerial:Well thats too bad~~ Thank you for accompanying me till now~~!
1) Absolutely 2) Sometimes, sometimes they will stay behind in home world if they don’t want to go 3) Nope~~! Kissing is as far as you’ll get, and maybe, just maybe, handholding...!
Thesoultaker88:Author i have some questions before reading and those are 1)will mc love his harem 2)will mc take his harem with him to other worlds 3) will there be smut or r18 chapters