Review Detail of Vinny_T in The Evolution Drug

I stumbled upon this novel when I was searching "the evolution...". It was a mere coincidence, but now that I have read some off it, it is surprising interesting. The reason I say interesting and not good is that there are still only five chapters when I have posted this. I think the author does a nice job of showing the reader the characteristics of each person in the story through their actions and emotions that rather than simply stating, which I think should be a given to all novels. I also like the subtle world design, but I would like to see some more showing and not telling on this part. Though, I did wave this off since the novel is still only in its prologue part. I am pretty sure the author is English because there isn't any (how should I say this) translation motifs in the writing style. But, over all I think it will be a pretty good work if the author improves a little in the future.