Review Detail of cakeonfrosting in Of the Stars, Sun, and Moon

Heyo- author here. This work is almost exclusively the love-child of my free time in college and boredom in said time. Do not expect the best writing quality, stability of updates, or consistency of character goals (story has a general direction I plan to take it). In return, I expect to be derided heavily for errors, called out on gross inconsistencies, and dragged through (not over) the coals when I make grievous errors. Constructive criticism would be nice, but not by any means necessary. In essence, this novel is the culmination of the ravings and fantasies of a colossal idiot in written form. I can only hope you enjoy.