Review Detail of Clockhours in hello my world

In the beginning, the description felt a little poetic and it was good. I have never seen a story open with such intriguing chapter. More chapters are needed to understand the story better, but from what I have read, this story has a very good potential. Don't put the translation in same volume, it distracts the readers and breaks the readers momentum. No one likes to get distracted while they are reading. Hope, you go forward with this story.