Grammar is quite bland. No specified spacings and paragraphs are huge. Character interactions seem a bit forced, but that should improve with proper paragraph writing. Author has a lot of pokemon knowledge, but execution is not up to the mark as only people who already know will understand anything from some chapters. A little editing and this should be one of the best poke fanfics, keep it up author!
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