Review Detail of THYRLOS in Pride of Academia

Shameless self promoting editor here!! As I have already said before this is not my work but a friend of mine who is lazy to make an account here to post his work so I volunteered to post it basically I do 70% of work. Anyway there are probably small to zero mistake about spelling or grammar since I am using Grammarly Premium when I edit and proofread it and the story shouldn't be a problem since the author have made stories before, the only problem is as I have said earlier the author is soooo LAZY so he needs motivation to do work so please guys give him some motivation do continue this work if you like it. For those who don't like it, don't care, you're not welcome so go away shoo! lastly, constructive criticism is welcome, haters begone! Read our work because Escanor said so!!