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ImNotNarcissistic
ImNotNarcissisticLv123yrImNotNarcissistic

If you’re looking to read a game novel, this ain’t it chief. Honestly, when I was reading this novel, it seemed like the author just woke up one day after a long night of partying, hungover and still a bit drowsy. A lightbulb suddenly lit up in their head, their brain was telling them, ‘Hey! Why don’t you write a novel, a game novel’. And so they did, they slowly got up from the cold hard floor littered with red plastic cups and empty beer bottles, dragging their body over to their computer, they started to type away, completely unaware of the bits of mysterious white powder covering the area around their nose. They started by writing down whatever cliches they could think of, and they made the protagonist and the antagonists while they were at it. The protagonist is fine for the most part, but the antagonists are on another level of stupid, as if the only thought in their mind is steal and loot gear, basically just throw-away villains. So then the author kept clacking away on their keyboard with their fingers coated with a nice layer of cheeto dust. Still hungover, the author couldn’t think clearly at all, their head was throbbing so using their arms as a pillow, they slowly relaxed and drifted off to the land of dreams. In there, they saw a mini version of themselves holding a mini shovel. The mini author begin to dig holes in the feild that was labled ‘the plot’. And after digging god knows how many holes, the mini author left and came back shortly after, this time holding a few signs in their hands. They planted the signs near the holes, one for each, and marked them as ‘plot hole 1’, ‘plot hole 2’, ‘plot hole 3’ and so on. The author then woke up and after adding a few more details to their novel, they slowly admired it, thinking to themselves, ‘Boy have I created a masterpiece’, then promptly hit ‘publish’.

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XxIRIS
XxIRISLv13XxIRIS

Melhor revisão 🤣😂🤣😂

Eddicted
EddictedLv5Eddicted

A very funny review. I wish the novel writers are atleast half as creative as this person.

AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5AzureConqueror

You'd make a good author

Zenithlr
ZenithlrLv4Zenithlr

This man needs a job called Book Reviewer Expert.

PlotAbsorber
PlotAbsorberLv2PlotAbsorber

hahaha

Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv13Origin_Saint

Beautiful review 😂😂❤️🔥

mehrnush
mehrnushLv5mehrnush

I think you have talent to be a writer my friend 😂😂😂

Druidc
DruidcLv3Druidc

This is some SSS-tier review right here😂👌. Write a novel and I'll read it 100% if I hadn't been isekaied yet.

Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv12Space_Fox

completely useless review, you said absolutely nothing about the novel or why it's bad

Shinesan
ShinesanLv3Shinesan

I think that your eyesight is malfunctioning

Space_Fox:completely useless review, you said absolutely nothing about the novel or why it's bad
ImNotNarcissistic
ImNotNarcissisticLv12ImNotNarcissistic

Hmm, try reading paragraphs 2 and 4 a few more times, and if you still don’t see it then I’m afraid all those teachers that taught you in school should be fired, that or you can go attend school along with all the other kindergarteners.

Space_Fox:completely useless review, you said absolutely nothing about the novel or why it's bad
DaoKill
DaoKillLv13DaoKill

Looking forward to you book

254_Otaku_Immortal
254_Otaku_ImmortalLv1254_Otaku_Immortal

😂😂😂You Are On Another Level

Naman1289
Naman1289Lv4Naman1289

Respect+++++

Naman1289
Naman1289Lv4Naman1289

Looking forward to your own book..

AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5AzureConqueror

Well OP did say it, you just ignored it. The author wrote down every cliché and wrote the novel based around them; side character stupidity is astounding; plotholes are all over

Space_Fox:completely useless review, you said absolutely nothing about the novel or why it's bad
jus10_single_right
jus10_single_rightLv10jus10_single_right

narci while your at it energetic can you please read glorious summoner warning: might have some nationalism cuz the author i also the author of 'castle of black iron' though i need you to read if it has nationalism and also leave a review thanks i now you're bored ☺️.

HalfX
HalfXLv3HalfX

When you find a better story in the comments then the novel

LupusRegina
LupusReginaLv5LupusRegina

i read up to chapter 6 and i can't continue any more, the conversations are as useless as the plot its like im reading rssg mixed with shura's wrath?

LupusRegina
LupusReginaLv5LupusRegina

*chapter 7 the one with veteran players

LupusRegina:i read up to chapter 6 and i can't continue any more, the conversations are as useless as the plot its like im reading rssg mixed with shura's wrath?