Review Detail of CCrazy_Caster in Breeding Dragons From Today

So I have read over 640 chapters, the book definitely started off very well. However, as soon as the the undead fragment plot it fell off. I do not know why he didn't just go for kingdom building and conquering other undead armies and building his own undead legion. Instead he decide to go down a hole and basically restart the story but worse. I'm sorry but I think the main loss was on the direction he went here. Plus please reduce the harem element I just don't think it's good for the story. Apart from that it has been a great story keep it up.