Upside: Has some good humor and scratches that good ol’ power crawl itch. Good try at making an innovative world. Downside: Characters personalitIes are weak, quality drops, starts to feel like rinse and repeat. With handholding and inconsistencies in the story it reaches the point of annoying as it goes on. Dropped :( Starts off fine with good potential but devolves later in the story and translation gets lazier, key points get skipped, foreshadowing for events that dont take place. Theres not a good timeline of how the story is progressing. It might be poor translation or the original writer is just winging it trying to keep up with the demands to put out chapters frequently. There is an idea in the authors head of where the story is going but it is not planned very far out as they write. By the time you realize that chapters are probably missing the quality has dropped so much you cant tell whats lazy and whats just not there. Around 150 there starts to be a sharp decline in it there could be between 1 and 30 chapters of missing context because suddenly there will be new mechanics taking place.
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