The story starts from slave labour Village and, going by the title, will be building to a kingdom. The world building seems very consistent, the magic system is mostly hard, but seems to have some mystery left as well. The competence is spread throughout the cast, there are several relevant figures, without whom the village would probably fail. They have real cause for the changes they try to enact. There are setbacks and challenges. And the progression seems perfectly plausible given the initial setup. Major bonus for (so far ) not including the whole creepy boy stalks girl "romance" from me
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