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This story is quite good. Taking into account the author being new, this story can even be considered to be excellent. The start is a bit slow and the characters are kinda meh, but with time the characters develop, and so does the story. Currently, I'd consider this story to be above average just taking these facts into account. However, the actual elements of the story which make it truly good and unique would be the ambitious world building and magic system. The world building is fantastic, you can tell the world is quite expansive even this early into the story, and the author is even working on some side novels that take place in the same world as this one. The magic system, atleast the Alchemy, is probably the most detailed power system I've ever seen. Not to say its the best, just the most detailed, so take it as you will. The sheer depth of alchemy in this story is super impressive nonetheless. Currently in the story (ch 49) we are also being introduced to some decent kingdom building elements, so if you like that genre you'll probably like this novel. All in all, I'd give this novel 4.5-4.8 stars, as it's still rather choppy, especially early on (it gets better), however, since I'm impressed by the author and the story is new (has good potential, worth supporting), it's an easy 5 stars from me.
AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
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DreamWeaverWriting:Thanks for reading and giving your review! I really appreciate your thoughts about the story. It's my first time writing, so the criticism is important for my improvement, as the support is for keeping me motivated.
Welcome on board! No, I choose to focus on the Kingdom Building and the Magic system, so I'm avoiding other strong themes to keep the novel interesting for everyone... The same goes for romance, although we might see some relationships forming later for the sake of the character's growth, it'll not be the focus here (Feel free to write fanfic if you like it)
_ReAdEr_:Does it have harem or romance? Plz no harem.
Good to hear, I was already reading it. Now that I got your confirmation I will add it to my library and vote.
DreamWeaverWriting:Welcome on board! No, I choose to focus on the Kingdom Building and the Magic system, so I'm avoiding other strong themes to keep the novel interesting for everyone... The same goes for romance, although we might see some relationships forming later for the sake of the character's growth, it'll not be the focus here (Feel free to write fanfic if you like it)
The answer is no, but that might not be the point in this novel. First, the novel isn't focused on the MC, is more of a multiple lead characters, though the MC has some protagonism. Amongst the leading characters, there's one who's ruthless, but the MC isn't particularly. Gender doesn't matter in this world, so no distinction between enemies. If a ruthless MC is a must for you, Karl might not suit your tastes, some even pointed out he was being naive. However, he's just a 15 years old farmer practically enslaved his whole life. He'll fall, grow and learn. the same the other leading characters...
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