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I absolutely adore the work the author has out into fleshing out the mechanics of this world and the magic system, even going as far as to create visual representations of key concepts such as the arrays and the runes as the MC learns or creates then. There's a logical progression of what tools are created and why. My primary gripe with the current writing style would be that certain perspectives shift suddenly, and it takes me a couple of moments to register where exactly we are, but that might be more down to me.

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AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

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Thanks for giving your review! Your support is really important to keep me motivated. I'll try to pay more attention to my changes between perspectives.

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