The opening itself has potential- it’s in good flow, direct and straight to the point. You can tell what is going on right away with no doubt. Then comes to the storyline, which is smooth like butter. It has a whole picture of what is happening. The author loves using visualisation in her stories for audiences themselves to picture and she does it well. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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