I like the storyline, it is very catchy. Descriptions flow well, so you don't miss a point. But the author needs to address the punctuation marks issue. A lot of statements are missing a full stop or a comma and it is a great deal when writing. So try to edit your work more. Other than that, do keep up the good work and good luck with your book.
Stephanie
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