Review Detail of EleazarXVIII in Harry Potter and the Legend of a Phoenix

1.A hun fanfic based on HP is supposed to be, well in everything i read about this fanfic, the wizarding world was referenced on such a small number of occasions that it's even hilarious. 2. Seriously, if the MC doesn't tell you that he's in HP's world and that he went to Diagon Alley I'd think this is some kind of a twilight-based novel or something like that. 3. I don't know about you, but I can't stand the fanfics where it is supposed to be based on a specific world, and the only thing you see of that world are the minimum dimensions of it and little else, it's frustrating because if I went to read the fanfic it was because in the title it says HP no twilight, and the tags do not help much about it my dear friend. 4. It is surprising how magic becomes practically garbage, we have a mini male Bella with super strength and God knows what else, little or almost no interest in the magic of the MC, I mean please is HP, migia is everything there and simplente We have bloodsuckers with inflated egos. 5.In conclusion, this doesn't seem like an HP fanfic, my friend, at least that's how I see it, the synopsis and the tags don't really help much, everything revolves around vampires and it's not what I'm looking for in an HP fanfic. The only thing that I started reading this is ephemeral so I leave it, I hope I have expressed myself well.

Thank you that helps, but then again. Its my fanfic. And of course the magical aspect isnt there yet he isn’t even in hogwarts yet. but the main aspect will always be on the vampire part. And i havent even read or seen Twilight so if there are similarities they are coincendental.