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heyo crazy cronie here, review on 31/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 37) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: A dark novel with a ruthless mc who loves to tortures only those who are criminals. long review: pros: 1) A completely original story. By original i meant the concept is original. And even if there are something similar to this, to me this is the first time I read something like this. 2) This is a dark novel. Brutal and cruel. Mc ruthlessly tortures people and author describes it. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro, coz i was bored of fluffy novels) 3) The only thing mentioned in this novel till now is how mc enjoys Ruthlessly torturing & killing criminals. Yeah no romance, no fantasy... Wait this might be a fantasy given system and all but yeah thats pretty much it... But then again this is interesting. 4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. When break is needed from all those tortures you get a break, when you need to see the tortured ones, they are tortured. 5) I love how the author mentions the user comments. That's a plus from me. Except for mc everyone has conversations. cons: 1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this is a dark novel. For people who love light hearted novel... Yeah don't even dare to read this one lol (This depends person to person, for me a pro) 2) Zero character depth. The mc is not explained. Mc shows no emotions rather just a cold expression. Heck how the mc looks we don't even know. Same with other characters, they are introduced only for filling spots. 3) updates, this novel is inconsistent in updates at least till now it is. Only 24 chapters has been released till now but i guess ch/day may remain inconsistent even in the future coz one day its 5chaps while there is only 2 next day and then next day there is none. 4) world building sucks. Nothing is explained. How the mc arrived in this world. Scratch that, we don't even know if this is original earth or a parallel one. I mean what we know is only from synopsis. Where he got system from, what is system, and everything else nothing about the world is mentioned. 5)Little to no character interaction. Almost no conversations. Literally MC has almost no conversations. Even for a loner mc this is a bit too much. 6) Idk if it's the author or TL but there are few mistakes... These mistakes can't be overlooked, for ex *SPOILER* A victim's tongue was cut by MC's methods, but he was still speaking (literally said roaring) with mc... IMO: - More conversations with MC & - a little bit of MC's background reveal will be appreciated.... But then again only 30+ chaps are revealed. RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (con-6) update: 78/10 (con-3) plot: 7.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1&4) characters: 7.5/10 (con-2) pacing: 8/10 (pro-4) dialogues: 8/10 (con-5) entertainment: 10/10 OVERALL: 4/5 Conclusion: This novel has excellent potential! A dark and brutal mc who enjoys torturing. I am seriously waiting for more updates:). Next review after chap 100 WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC may seem evil, but he is an anti- hero, though me may act evil in the future... - mc is very calculative. And he has never failed till date.

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