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Like a lot of people have said, this story starts out with the MC having a fairly limited system but it's a system nonetheless. MC also discovers a huge secret about his "sister." From context it's literally a world changing secret. After the first arc, all of that is just thrown away. The system doesn't really appear and his sister is now in the hands of a potential enemy and he just doesn't seem to care (although he was seemingly trying to get stronger to protect her) nor does she reappear. After the first arc the writing style and MC's personality seem to change drastically. All of a sudden there's a bunch of random cliche side characters that appear and chapters are randomly dedicated to their stories just for the to basically disappear. Also, the MC suddenly becomes super manipulative and really indifferent messing with these people's lives for his enjoyment. He literally watches as someone he left alive rapes and murders 3 girls and thinks leaving this guy alive was a good idea and is entertained by it. Lastly, it's just extremely inconsistent. Somehow the princess becomes a tier 6 mage in less than 6 months just by being alive when the super small advanced class in the academy is basically for people that have a hope of becoming tier 5 or above. Most students graduate as tier 3 after 3+ years at the academy. MC hasn't even reached tier 2 by that point. Also, it's extremely hard to tell what tier the MC actually is because it doesn't often talk about it or show his system stats after the first arc. When it does talk about it he goes from tier 1 to tier 5 in like 3 years (more believable that the Lilia) but then he leaves for 3 years and comes back and they congratulate him on breaking through to tier 5 while he was gone so was he tier 5 when he left or not? It's really almost like reading two different stories at some points. It starts out fine and had some promise but it's like a different author started writing at some point. Disappointing.

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Don’t worry, it gets better (or rather goes back to the original) for awhile and throws out EVERYTHING that happened after he got to Saint Lauren’s the first time (lilia never existed and neither did those 5 years), then it gets much worse and falls into pure plagiarism of Warcraft 3, various King Arthur novels, and finally League of Legends complete with all the original character names. Then it gets dropped, presumably because the author was either sued or beaten to death by the original owners of the content.