Review Detail of CrowMoonrise in Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Read up to C64 and cant believe I even got that far. The MC is just not likeable. I cant stand his actions or thoughts, just a cringy 'chunibyo' on sugar even though he should mentally be 30 years old but you get this instead ( although the Author commented that there is a reason for it but that doesn't make the MC likeable ). His training arc at the beginning also makes no sense considering the slow pace of the story and once he got to Hogwarts he is barely doing any training/research and even plans on joining the Quidditch Team. So why the training arc to push him up to Adult Wizard standards? he has enough free time at Hogwarts that could've been used. The writing quality is acceptable considering he is writing in Spanish and translating to English via Google Translator. Although it looks like the Author picked up the story pace later on but the first 60 chapters are only pre Hogwarts + first 2 weeks at Hogwarts which is pretty slow for 200+ chapters in 1+ year. If you can ignore or stand the MC then this FF might be worth reading in 2-3 years.