Review Detail of Almarik_san in Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

I'm at chapter 8, the developpment of the character is boring and too OP. It's like the author want to take the powers from all his favorite manga and give them to his protagonist, a wizard, less than 11 years old. I don't buy it. 8 chapters of "magical theory" that don't work, and, "Oh I'm learning all the things possible in a few month because of course!" Lame