Review Detail of SlimyFish in Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

My only concern with this fic is that it seems to do too much, too quickly. Ethan's only a second year and he's already got a massive fortune, learning the unforgivables and seems to highly advanced in so many magics. I see this an awful lot in HP fics where the author ends up with nothing to do in the 'slower years' I.e 2 3 5 and 6 because they didn't pace their OCs development. Obviously this is a few years (IRL time) away and their could already be plans for those years, but I see this fic running out of steam. (Seriously he's 12, he really shouldn't be capable of opening a bank account, learning inforgivables or be on the level of 5th or 6th years if not higher).