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Review Detail of Stillness_Of_Death in Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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Writing: Not bad but needs improvement. Update: No comment. I mean every HP fanfics start with at a dozen chapters but very few maintain their momentum while the rest are dropped. Storyline: MC's too OP and no proper explanation for MC'S Powers. Character: Typical OP MCish behavior. Nothing that stands from other dropped fanfics. I mean nothing is perfect. Fanfics are like what we would have done if we're in HP kind of thing. As humans are not perfect the author should mix failures in success. I mean like how can a normal human can control magic and fight better than most adults at age of 5/10 year old albeit the human is a transmigration without hard work and years of experience even if he is creative is beyond my imagination. Long story short if you need to have a OP MC then write in the perspective of a normal human from Earth. Not everyone are genius you know. Background: No comment. Story is still young.

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Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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Cultreevation
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I think writing is okay. It has to be mentioned that its MTL so the algorithms have improved xD.

AzureFluteFan2
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The dude soils himself if his mom so much as looks in his direction, this is such a weird cliche that irks me anytime I see it

Genn_stars
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That's kind of...

AzureFluteFan2:The dude soils himself if his mom so much as looks in his direction, this is such a weird cliche that irks me anytime I see it