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Review Detail of Se7en in Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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Se7en
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As a shameless author... Or very smart and cunning, I'm giving myself five stars, just because I can, and because that might be the only one I'll get... Sniff. (Feel sorry for me and give me five stars, hehe). I hope my story pleases you all, just as many of the stories here please and cheer me. :) I would also like you to tell me what I can improve on the fanfic, because it would improve the experience for you guys, and it would help me to write better (And learn English). But please, when commenting, be respectful. I would love to receive a negative review to help me improve, but I would be very disappointed (and perhaps annoyed) if I were only given name-calling and mockery. But I still hope you have fun reading and commenting, just as I had fun writing. Thanks Se7en! :)

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Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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RikySmith123
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will he have love interests and who?

Se7en
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I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!

RikySmith123:will he have love interests and who?
ShadowMonaRCh001
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It is nice reading something light and funny .also awaiting to see hiss pranks

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999Lv13JamesAnthony1999

Luna best girl. Also she can be such an interesting character that can be written in so many ways that are all enjoyable to read.

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
Selectials
SelectialsLv4Selectials

Надо ещё больше глав тебе делать.

Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv13Sin_of_GREED

so only one love interest??

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
YearlyRain
YearlyRainLv1YearlyRain

How long will this fanfic be???

KingOfGods
KingOfGodsLv3KingOfGods

please let him learn observation haki through Occlumency training

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
Daoist007877
Daoist007877Lv2Daoist007877

What are you going to do about Greengrass and Davis. since they were looking at him like he doesn't exist, what are you going to do about them, he should just stop being with them then and if they act like he does not exist then he should do the same to them

LeylinTheFifth
LeylinTheFifthLv4LeylinTheFifth

Just with this you have guaranteed all my support and stones , take them. It shall be like that until the end of time for Luna is justice , Luna is life , Luna is THE Waifu. Is there a possibility Mione can enter?

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
Kiyoung
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Will it have harem? Who are gonna be in the harem? Or is it a single FL? And who's the FL?

BigReader500
BigReader500Lv3BigReader500

you sir are a sub if u think Hermione is am ideal girl never found what's so good about her even the actress who played her has a skinny figure. Face was ok I guess.

LeylinTheFifth:Just with this you have guaranteed all my support and stones , take them. It shall be like that until the end of time for Luna is justice , Luna is life , Luna is THE Waifu. Is there a possibility Mione can enter?
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LeylinTheFifth
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The thing is I'm way beyond just looking for thickness , I'm telling you from experience that dating dummy thick is annoying. I prefer having a Mione who is smart and beautiful than a stupid thick. And to support my decision try looking for a smart thick to see if she won't cheat on you , actually you don't need to look far and just type OnlyFans in your browser. I have dated a lot of through my life and I tell you , bro look for smart girls , your brain will thank you. To summarize , I think Mione and Luna are ideal girl because they are very intelligent and smart

BigReader500:you sir are a sub if u think Hermione is am ideal girl never found what's so good about her even the actress who played her has a skinny figure. Face was ok I guess.
DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6DarkKnight32

i left this novel to gather chapters so what year is mc on did he graduate school?

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
Victortoery12
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Edit your previous chapters and correct your grammar, an author doesn’t just write a chapter and quit. They edit the chapters many times before they even publish, and edit even after publication.

GeekNovels
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Praise you for no harem my guy

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
virusONtimez
virusONtimezLv12virusONtimez

this author is vary smart FIVE STARS HE SHAL HAVEEEE

Wilder6
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Love the story so far, it’s one of my favorite HP fanfics. I think your onto something great here, so keep it up and don’t listen to the hater’s. My only thought is that the story progress is to slow, would like if it was faster or you start writing more chapters. But overall it really great so thank you.

MissingArmOfToji
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Best girl

Se7en:I'm developing the story to see which girl fits best as a love interest, but the one I want is the best character in the franchise, Luna Lovegood!
alaskan_42b
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your right you are shameless