Review Detail of Leo_Scheiber_5414 in The Flyte Archives

We only have 10 chapters so far but it seems like a really solid novel. I'm enjoying the mc, characters so far, and development of the story. It's pretty great that the author puts quality over quantity. Though many people will probably think that both the chapters and story progression are too slow. But if you know how to read slow and appreciate the reading you'll probably enjoy this. The interactions between the characters are nice and natural. The way the world background is developed is really natural, as in the author doesn't just completely interrupt the story to tell the reader something, he has a character explaining it. Their still tons of mystery around the world and story but we are learning naturally as the story progresses. The English and descriptiveness of the story is much better than most light and web novels out their. Also that chapter were it was described how the mc saw visions in the point of view of different people (most likely important to the story) seeing a flaming comet (him I assume) come down from the sky was super cool. Just imagining that made me curious and hyped for who the characters were and etc. Super excited to see what comes next.