Review Detail of Darkling_Dark in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Started good and was going that way until the author decided to add vaults. Vaults were nice till the sin vault where he got fckd up royally and didn't even noticed it for a along time, as if it wasn't enough he got and infected himself again with sin vault (which has the seven sins and each one of those sins affects his si-ssy personality till he gets his 2 girl friends.) Overall wasted potential for an amazing story. I recommend to simply leave it.