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Masterofall1
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The Time Travel BS at Chapter 306 307 and so on ruined the entirety of the story that has been written and from then on. You may not agree with me and that's fine, but anytime time travel is used like that to further the plot and bring change to the MC feels VERY VERY cheap and forced.

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HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

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anime_god_9144
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first negative comment I agree with .... it really did feel forced.