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Review Detail of manyaktavuk in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

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3 only this novel has a big potential and wasted i think mc like china cultivate mc in a 6 chapters mc change personality eddie,luna and marcys just annoying and only created for word count"i think" but probably not. their all talks are annoying and borign just these there of you make me hate this novel and the 7 deadly sins part too (writer have a depression that time i think) i can only say wrong minor characters boring dialogs mc's personality sucks(and change to ultimate sucks to normal sucks per 6 chapters) and beacuse of chapter per day is too high writer chan cant produce sone thing good i think writer only 3-4 chapters per week to be just good as start

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HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

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Eddie is a chad