well not really to my liking i didnt read that far but what made me drop it was how stupid the mc reacted to the wand, like i get it, wands make it easier to cast magic and his wandless magic might degrade but if that happens thats just because the mc stopped practicing wandless magic. Also this an AU of HP so that just means that the author will change the world to fit his character and not the other way around, what i mean by that is that they have potholes but then use "its an alternate universe so its different". some might like but i dont. good luck on your story author
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