Review Detail of agmmagm in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Not good not bad this fanfic is in the middle. (4th year hp ending review) Plus - MC isnt like i am the best of everything type of guy so you wont read one man show where other chars dont matter Negative - he doesnt have any motivation nor some depth of character. You can sum MC with "i like magic" but nothing more. He is just that. why this is something negative, read Negative3 Negative 2 - this one is a big one. VAULTS. They are the extantion of the first negative. Like i wrote he is just a i_like_magic guy soo what should he do with all his time in Hogwarts? we give him some random vaults nobody can pass so he can be different from some random nobody. First vault was a good one, they put something in it for safety sake etc. But after that other vaults turn into kind of missing legacy mixed with deathly trap (%50-%50). Why anyone leave some kind of vault in a some random school (think from their angle these vaults are old things) our they built the school after vaults but to sum it up vaults are meh.. Negative 3 - magic in the novel is just the word magic nothing more no mystery in it no content of it.. to understand you need to read the fanfic.