Review Detail of Golias in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

well, the story was interesting, although I regret reading it this far, chap. 144, I feel like I should have jumped right into it just to read what I wanted to know before going on, but unfortunately I didn't. back to the subject, in all of the harry potter fanfics my favorite arc is the triwizard tournament, it doesn't matter if the mc will do anything else fun, overt or hidden, but since he won't participate, well, the story is dead for me. of course, if it were just that, i wouldn't stop reading the story so easily, but the author has a certain fondness for mystery that i have a great disdain, i don't even know how i got here. not the kind of mystery where the autor hides the plot from the reader, but the mystery where the autor hides the mc actions from the reader, this is the mystery i hate the most, it totally breaks my immersion in the story separating the mc from the reader. get the mc to talk about something, just for you can cut the event off in the next moment only to resume many chapters later when he's already performing the action? nah, it's not for me. I can't characterize the story as bad just for it, far from it, it's well written and with few edges, but for me, it was easier to read a story full of edges without these two problems, so... here I say goodbye, I hope this criticism help those with the same notion by avoiding something I could have avoided. ps: I really found the idea of ​​coffers totally unnecessary, just adding plot full of information where it could be spent building relationships, but since you focused on magic and stuff, I can't criticize a monkey for liking bananas, anyway... Good Luck.