Review Detail of DaoistyQNGiX in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
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MC acts like a wand is The One Ring with how dramatic he is about it and its hard to read, he is 12year old trying to hit on mrs greengrass in the most cringe ways... actually that entire interaction with her was painful to read, there have been 3 changes to the main plot... 1.) girl potter twin 2.)lily is muggles teacher(alive parents) 3.) two trolls but in teo different spots He has no interaction with the main cast and has been dragging out these “Vaults” of the fouders for some quest but they suck and are extremely boring. Had high hopes for this but once the wand part happened little things started to add up sne make me dislike this fanfic
HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
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yeah the vaults arc is extremely boring, I like the third vault when he fight against kraken but thing get boring with the test and test and test and each test have 2-3 chapter. I know it's for his growth but like just keep it simple, like 3 chapter for 1 vaults or maybe 4, but sometime it get dragged until 6-7 chapter even tho it just half the part of chapter.
Noel_Elitia:try reading when i got reincarnated as a spider with my goddess you won't be disappointed
