Review Detail of Sevennamed in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
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There are a couple of things I really dislike about this story: I absolutely loathe transmigration with memory / identity loss tropes. I believe it's the lowest form of fanfiction. There's something very off about the sentence structure and grammar that makes this story uncomfortable to read. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
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Avaritia_0010:did you even try reading 5 chapters or did you read 1 den criticize the story just because you don't like transmigration
Reading a story is like listening to music the sentences should flow together into the paragraphs in the paragraphs into the chapter. Reading this was like a listening to a radio that was jumping between stations every few seconds.
peter_spindler:ok so you don't like transmigration with memory/personality loss. I can actually get that, but the grammar thing I don't understand, you gotta elaborate. if you can't I implore you to raise the rating at least by a half
Sevennamed:Reading a story is like listening to music the sentences should flow together into the paragraphs in the paragraphs into the chapter. Reading this was like a listening to a radio that was jumping between stations every few seconds.
Sevennamed:Reading a story is like listening to music the sentences should flow together into the paragraphs in the paragraphs into the chapter. Reading this was like a listening to a radio that was jumping between stations every few seconds.
It's kinda weird you go around telling people to read you own novel/fanfic without saying you are the author
Noel_Elitia:try reading when i got reincarnated as a spider with my goddess you won't be disappointed
Noel_Elitia:try reading when i got reincarnated as a spider with my goddess you won't be disappointed
