Review Detail of Eitan_Davidson in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

i am really enjoying this fanfic. definitely in my top 3 HP fanfics.I like the MC isn't insanely op that instead he faces set backs and has to work hard to improve. this makes milestones in the novel feel earned. furthermore I appreciate the cautious but still kind nature of the mc. the characters feel like real people and we slowly gain a better understanding of them which is great. though I do feel the mc's sister is a little overlooked and underdeveloped. I know this book is supposed to be break for the author because of burnout but I really hope more focus can be put on it because so far it's fantastic. my only criticism would be for more updates and a consistent release schedule.