Review Detail of Lafafar in Asura's Path In Douluo Dalu
Review detail
So its me, the Author here. It seems like a trend to rate your own Fan-Fic a 5 Star but tbh, i can't.... I really can't lol. My grammar is pretty good.... For someone who's first language isn't english but sometimes i will make simple mistakes that i could've easily done like it should be done, i'm trying to edit as much as mistakes as i see and if someone comments on a paragraph i will edit it when i see it! This is also why i rated my own Fan-Fic a 4-Star for Translation Quality I also rated myself a 4-Star for Stability Of Updates due to the fact that i won't push myself to write if i'm sick, tired or have another important thing too do that tires me out. The other three i gave myself a 5-Star cause: >Story Development: Might not be the best but i THINK i did a pretty good job. >Character Design: I used Original Characters from Douluo Dalu 99% of the time. Regarding the MC, he didn't change much after his reincarnation which i see a lot in Novels or Fan-Fics which confuses me lol. >World Background: Most of the places MC stays or visits are places from the Original Story except a certain place i created myself since it fit with the story and it might actually be the truth since it would make sense but i don't know, i THINK i did a good job xd. --------------------------------- THIS IS IMPORTANT!: I only read the manga regarding Douluo Dalu and things i find on the Wiki, sometimes i edit certain Beasts ages to fit better into the story. Another thing is that, like i said, this Fan-Fic is written solely on knowledge i get from the Manga and Wiki so if something differs from the Novel, please forgive me and spare my soul from your rage x3 <3
Asura's Path In Douluo Dalu
Lafafar
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I do not know how i would enable that, but if it has to do with real money.... Please don't, in a week it is Mother's Day, buy something nice for her instead <3
AddictedSolis:Your book is amazing and I would really appreciate it if you would let us gift you coins
You're a good guy my friend, i wish you the best that could happen to you and your family, being nice to and having strong bonds within family is getting rarer each passing day in our word
Lafafar:I do not know how i would enable that, but if it has to do with real money.... Please don't, in a week it is Mother's Day, buy something nice for her instead <3
It's everything a man of culture need... Smart and ruthless mc.. And yea it's better than those fanfiction i read on webnovels
Sin_of_GREED:why is there no real review of this novel out all 100 something review there none that explains what is in this novel ??
Man_of_culture_69:Every girl you dream of😏😏😏...dw. im big fan of harem... And you won't be disappointed 😂
Man_of_culture_69:Every girl you dream of😏😏😏...dw. im big fan of harem... And you won't be disappointed 😂
My cultured friend... Those two are my favorite too😍...and yea they are plus xiao wu's mom is also in harem (in original she died because of illness) and yea mc is evil to his enemies especially that coward grand master i never liked his character 😂😂😂....i'd say it's best harem fanfic of soul land to me... I read others but they just keep on nerfing mc or leave xiao wu for tang san... I mean Com on we are here for her and you just ignored her... I say just toss Tang san to some village girl😂😂😂...there so many beautiful girls... And why restrict yourself just for the plot..
Thigh_Master0124:Zhu zhuqin, xiao wu. As long as 2 of them are here I am gonna read it
My fellow man. I am so happy to hear this news. As I always read douluo dalu harem fanfic without xiao wu is just so dumb. And I thank you from bottom of my heart for wasting your time answering me. Thanks and I will read this fanfic for sure. 😊
Man_of_culture_69:My cultured friend... Those two are my favorite too😍...and yea they are plus xiao wu's mom is also in harem (in original she died because of illness) and yea mc is evil to his enemies especially that coward grand master i never liked his character 😂😂😂....i'd say it's best harem fanfic of soul land to me... I read others but they just keep on nerfing mc or leave xiao wu for tang san... I mean Com on we are here for her and you just ignored her... I say just toss Tang san to some village girl😂😂😂...there so many beautiful girls... And why restrict yourself just for the plot..
still no at review just a comment anyway which side does mc stands on spirit hall or Shrek second is it a Harem if yes who r the members what is the relationship between mc and tang San or his master etc ??
Man_of_culture_69:It's everything a man of culture need... Smart and ruthless mc.. And yea it's better than those fanfiction i read on webnovels
Dude... Didn't you read tags??? Harem? Yes Members? I won't spoil much... Xiao wu and cat girl and pink haired girl and so far you ll get surprised And yea.. His relationship to tang san iw like acquaintce...he ain't gonna babysit him or whatever like most authors do... And yea for the coward grand master he suffered most 😂😂😜😈...i never liked him... Got cucked by our mc😁.. And yea ourc mc is not villain or hero.. Just grey mc or he doesn't take any sides... Why should he take??he should enjoy his journey rather than following cannon
Sin_of_GREED:still no at review just a comment anyway which side does mc stands on spirit hall or Shrek second is it a Harem if yes who r the members what is the relationship between mc and tang San or his master etc ??
When he is back home (i think), because one of his friends needs “emotional support” because his/her dad died, so our Author-san is checking on him/her most of the time, after all who would write a fanfic when one of your friends needs some support...
goberrrr3727:when are you going to update more chapters ????
I hope everything is fine with you, and also hope that your dear friend is doing well, best of wishes for both of you, Will be waiting for your coming back, of course after your friend is in the beast shape ever, I'm just here to say that you are not forgotten 🍻🍻🍻
Lafafar:I do not know how i would enable that, but if it has to do with real money.... Please don't, in a week it is Mother's Day, buy something nice for her instead <3
