Mm yes me likey! :D I think the concept is very neat, and I like how you explained things about their families hehe! Me really like reading royalty stories too, so that's a plus! :3 I also love how each character has different motives and personalities! :D Their interaction with each other is also a pleasure to read, be it the feel-goodsies moments between the FL and ML, or when the royals fight! :3 And another great thing is, I love reading about their feelings and emotions hehehe! Makes it easier for me to empathize for them:D I think it'd be nicer if you tone down the POV switches a bit? :3 Maybe you could do something like, "You won't get away!" Lord X said while brandishing his sword. "Don't disrupt me!" Lord Y yelled as he kept running towards somewhere. But that's totally up to you! :3
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