Im currently about 80 chapters in and it feels like the writing quality has gone down a bit after each chapter. Writing quality - 2 -Pretty lackluster, overall "its in english" but the wording could be chosen better to create a smoother sentance. At multiple points the sentences will jar to a stop or end up be missing key words to make it flow right. Story Development - 3 -it doesnt seem like theres much of a plan at all, except "protect family. kill enemy." and whatever story is there feels patched together. Character Design - 2 -Not much to say there, typical OP MC that really is too dumb for his own good and is OP just to be OP. updating stability - 2 - none listed / week. granted there was a new update ~14hrs before posting this. Maybe it'll look up from here. World background- Legit feels like a ripoff of solo levelling meets latna: survival of a sword king. Overall i wouldnt say avoid this, but veteran readers be warned: this is a bit rough. Maybe it'll improve in the future, and if it does ill come back and edit this.
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