Review Detail of Quade_Ong in LIFE IN 2021

I realy liked the conversation at the start between the friends about their lives in the future, it seems like a real conversation that most people have at that age. I also admire how the main character doesn't just want the stereotypical American dream. My main criticism is the grammar and spelling could use some work. I also feel like writing that you agree with the quote the you mentioned felt a bit unecessary. Still, its a good job.