so here's the thing, the story undoubtedly has good great ideas even, but it's bogged down by too many of them, shringan and quirk and breathing style and haki and system, not to mention the base power system, that's just boring, the ideas are there, though imo the author just fucks it up. which would be fine if there wasn't one major problem, the complete disrespect to the original story is just annoying, like come on man, you don't have to trash on the og charcters every couple chapters. overall this story is ok at best, a complete and utter drag to read at worst 2-3/5 depending on how much of a weeb you are
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