Review Detail of 3PoundsOfRice in Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler

I've always believed that system fanfiction doesn't deserve the top rating, I still do, but you did so well in everything else that I'll forget my 2 star policy to system fanfics xD The story have some minor problems, like you didn't change anything that could have been altered, like for example Renxue's mission, a bigger foolishness now with the presence of a genius like the MC that will certainly put the world at her feet. Also I think you write a lot of unnecessary fight scenes, that's not a problem for me, but you could spend your energy on progressing the plot. Thanks for the chapters